And mechanically, it's not a half-bad structure to get readers interested in the "hey wait, that's weird" and want to come back to see where it will go in the future. I thought that the chapter also did a good job at hinting that there's still wheels within wheels to go for the full story behind things that are going on, since I saw what happened with the Swolax there. All of that more or less screams "nothing is going to be the same again" once the dust settles from this. Since I seriously doubt that Owen's just going to be able to sweep things under the rug once he comes to post-Orbening, and it looks like Rhys engineered this to happen under the noses of his colleagues. Okay, so the obvious strength of this chapter was how it just smashed the status quo into a million pieces and set things up such that things can just go from 0-60 in the next chapter. ![]() Not that this was exactly a bad note to leave off on to keep the audience in suspense. Though I suppose the shakeout from the Orbening will need to wait for another day. And with how credulous Owen is, I'm not sure she'd need to work all that hard to pull a fast one over him and the readers. But I suspect that that won't become apparent for a good while into the story for here. Alright, so admittedly I'm a bit spoiled secondhand that this character is bad news even if I don't know the specifics behind why. Oh, so that's who encouraged him to ignore Rhys.
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